Takeaway Box, February 2015 (22nd)Takeaway Box, February 2015 (22nd) by AyeAye12
How much XP
does the modern world hold?
There, the chippie-gold
paper basket, the salmon bronze
in a hovel of twigs.
Dungeon of leaves
holding Man's treat,
a family surprise.
Every car here is red.
Camouflaged boxes whistle white noise
I drum my fingers on the wooden fence-wall
and gain a greenish tint,
The Electronic ZionismOPEN. Empty, black stage; the void.The Electronic Zionism by AyeAye12
Enter TUMBLR. Introduced with a plume of ocean-blue smoke. She is a woman, middle aged, dressed in a long and flowing navy dress.
She speaks to the audience, joyous;
TUMBLR: The feed has broken! Ferguson has grown in appetite and consumed the world in a righteous rage. Streets are aflame in the reds of freedom and all souls lay bare for Goddess Morality. The cosmic dialectic nears its conclusion. The samsaric GIF has stopped, rejoice!
A sickly hiss of emerald green smoke. Enter: CHAN, Manifestation Of Freedom’s Prosperities; Anarchy, Liberty, Decadence, Depravity. He is a crooked, dwarfish old man, holding a cane of volcanic bone.
CHAN: And yet, the politicians sip their Mountain Dew in a steel-grey White House. The bankers relax behind cardboard avatars of themselves. Hong Kong burns. Westminster burns. The Eye of Edgehill has been gouged out, left a gaping hole in the side of Elizabeth Tower, yes- but still the eaters find refug
Skies over San AngeloThere is something about you
16. And I write stuff.|
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NICE THINGS PEOPLE HAVE SAID ABOUT ME
~AyeAye12's pieces are simply a-m-a-z-i-n-g! I absolutely love the fact that he has taken relatable subjects and created pieces which makes his readers think. I could definitely relate with the piece 'Maths Class', which by the way is a very humorous piece. He is extremely talented, and you will find yourselves pouring through his collection of literature with amazement. They are all wonderful pieces.
Of intimidating talent.
He's great at imagery and makes you feel as if you've taken a trip without moving from your seat.
There is something about [his] voice as a poet that I have heard in no-one else. It is wonderfully warm and refreshing. [He has] a way of wording things that grabs the attention and makes me smile and [he is] wonderful. I imagine it takes no small amount of skill, so well done.
The warrior-poet bleeds imagery and moves in free verse.
(I suspect massive quantities of cocaine were involved.)
Aye is just... different, from the usual works I read here on dA. That's pretty much what I can say.
AyeAye12 never fails to make me lol, or at least marvel at his ability to shatter pre-conceptions of what literature is supposed to be.
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