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A relationship with you would be as nice
(and grotesque) as
tangerine milk,
or nectarine pasta.

I'll admit you're pretty cute,
but from experience
Smattering you with Platonic
flattery
connects me better,
turning me into an
adolescent gear,
So I'm going to
start
escaping from
this flowery thought-sphere,
So we can try and be friends?

The whole idea tastes of
mozzarella, I know,
But you seem to be
The closest thing
To perfection, as of now,
So I don't want to
break an angel with
romance.
I'm not going to
chug you down
my bachelor-stabbing throat,
'cause I know
I wouldn't like the taste
of tangerine milk.

Maybe once she returns
I'll begin to fall for peaches?
The idea sounds
as plausible
as apricot tagliatelle,
but without knowing
what's disgustingly
beautiful,
How could we eat fruit?
SO yeah. This is a poem about me trying to stop falling in love with someone,and is pretty abstract but the imagery was nice, IMO.

Leave feeback please!
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cskadoz Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013   General Artist
nice imagery as justification! :highfive: just do what i do: warn you are easily addicted and ask may i borrow your beautiful leg? yeah . . . !
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
My beautiful leg, wait what
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cskadoz Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013   General Artist
no, her beautiful leg . . . dude!
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
If you mean the her in Stanza 5, then I didn't mention a leg! xD
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