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has b££n lost[???????????]
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Actual title is "£rror;".
Experimental, glitch poem. 
did I win

Unglitched Text;

Error;

this idea
has been lost
to the recycle bin
of mind,
lost in the one second
between “I got it” and
nothing on the tounge,
neuron flotilla lost
in synapse sea.

this pro/poe/untitled38598
has crashed.

gonegonegone

</p>About when you forget an idea.
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Skae2 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
About forgetting an idea...? wallpoper.com/images/00/28/33/…

Wow ha ha. I feel so related to this.
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Writer
xP Might be hard to realize under the glitchiness, Iunno.

But thank you, glad you do! :D
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SweetsAndCharades Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
Brilliant
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KobaltUranus Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist
Goddamnit aye, you made me get attracted. I'll never know why i get attracted on every kind of error, even if it's poetry.
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Writer
xP
Glad I could bait you though ;D
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MiniJacksonDiAngelo Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Writer
Has it been six months since you got a DD?
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Writer
It was on the 22nd of September 2013, so I'm guessing the 22nd of this month when I can get them again, but I'm not sure.
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MiniJacksonDiAngelo Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student Writer
Kay, I would recommend submitting this. ^.^
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student Writer
:blush:  
Why not suggest it for me instead, and make me seem less self centered?! :B
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MiniJacksonDiAngelo Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student Writer
That's why I was asking...XD 

Tell me when the six-months will be over, or can I suggest it now?
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student Writer
You can suggest, and then if they like it that much the CV's will put it up when its okay to.
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MiniJacksonDiAngelo Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student Writer
Okay ^.^
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AmyYang Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student
Nice! :D makes me think of a crazy "404 Not Found" error message
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you, that was the effect I was going for! :D
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joycemanor Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
haha, i really love this! i've never seen a glitch poem before. 
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you :D
chromeantennae has some pretty good glitch poetry, as do others, but I can't think of any specific name at the moment, sadly.
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joycemanor Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
yeah, i've read some of chromeantennae's work before today, but i didn't know he did glitch as well. thanks for the reference! i'll be sure to check into that, glitch poetry seems lovely.
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconbowplz: And I appreciate you doing so, Joyce. :heart: I can lead you to my glitch poetry if you'd like. ^_^
Your support is greatly appreciated. :hug:
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joycemanor Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
i'm happy to! thank you so much, yes, do you mind directing me to a glitch poem of yours? thank you in advance, i really appreciate you!
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joycemanor Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
they're lovely! is this an idea of your own or inspired by someone else's work?
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

Glitch/Ripples is inspired by music.

Glitch In The System was inspired by a photograph taken and doctored by the truly inspirational and fantastic OnlyOliveOil. But I've always wanted to do glitch poetry and I think my first 2 attempts really came off, well. ^_^

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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student Writer
You're very welcome :3
And it does seem pretty cool, yeah! (This being my first glitch poem)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconbowplz: :heart:
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